Well, damn. :D
Well done with this one. Nice feeling with this one. Reminiscent of some old style techno. :D
In case you're interested, I made a over of this myself, a while back. Check it out, if you want. :D
I think the build up is much better, you tried to insert the voices with instruments very cool =D, but some VST in your song is out of harmony so I would give a 9 =D
I wold give my song a 7 because of bad mastering, easy build up and some fail instruments
thank you very much KrazeyOne =)
Ah, welcome back. :D
As always, great mix. Nicely done keeping to the original, as well. Loved your take on it. :D Again, welcome back to the music making industry. Hope to see more, and soon! :D
Ohh lawd, expect me to be making music but at a kind of snail's pace. I love doing this, but college and everything else RL loves to just get in mah face :<
Thank you though, I will always keep trying.
You've gotten much better...
...since Hardstyle Era. :D The only real criticism I can offer on this one is the first break, where the snares sped up. I think it started one beat too early. Then again, I'm probably just being picky. XD Anyway, great job with this one. :D
P.S. Nicely done with the break between the melody and the outro, especially with the change in bass tone. THe change is a lot more subtle. Very nicely done. :D
Thanks man. I Didn't spend as much time on this as Hardstyle Era, but i'm glad others think I'm improving and like my work more :).
This was good. :D
Very trance-y. The only thing i could suggest is not to let the melody overpower the rest of the song, which happened a couple times. I did like the gated bass, but I think this song might benefit from a steady bass beat, on top of that. Great song, though. Definitely worth more than one listen. :D
It's quite good, but...
well, lemme see if i can give you some critiques. :D
Beginning: Great job with that sound. Gave it a really nice touch. Really well done beginning. The transition, not so much. XD To me, it sounded like the kick bass was off key to the background piano. Which brings me to...
Break: I did like the piano with the chorus "ahh"s in the background. I think it couldve used a little percussion in that part before the melody came in, but when when it did, well done. Very professional sounding.
Melody: I liked this. The only real objection I have is that the melody always fell right on the beat, except for the occasional stutter. It's always good to mix it up a bit. :D The transition out of the melody was amazing.
End: Great job again with the noise. :D the only realy thing I can ask is not to make the key change from the melody to the end the first thing the listener hears. It kinda throws you off.
All in all, good song. You're on my fav list. Lemme know when you have another song out, and I'll be glad to hear it. :D
Thanks, Good review, I appreciate you taking your time writing all that.
Break: I look at it today and I am ashamed of it too.
Melody: Probably my longest fail/try melodies ever made. I spent two weeks just perfecting the melody...
People call the beginning leads random, and the melody random as well, but thats just what true hardstyle is, newgrounds is too biased and filled with kids.....
Yes, the end I added an extra sound to make it clear it was the beggining, and lots of hardstyle songs have repeats of the beginning as the outro.
Well, I'm not quite sure where to start with this one. XD I think the echo on the first guitar was a bit too heavy. kinda made it lose where it was in the beat. Nice intro transition into it, however. :D I think if you kinda stretched it out, and made it sound less rushed. it'll work quite well.. Oh, and a big "Huh?" to the ending. A dropped beat and some Sonic-like stabs does not an ending make. :D
Haha I know that ending is weird =3.. but i was bored and didn't know how to do the ending =p
thanks a lot for your review!!!
Very nice one, here. :D
I don't really have any negative critiques here. Great mix, Surge. :D I think one of the high points of the song was the transitions. They were literally seamless. Again, very nicely done. :D
Thank you! I still have a lot to work on, but I definitely need as much feedback as possible :)
Nicely finished. :D
Only reason for a 9: some of the transitions seemed a little forced. Other than that, great job finishing it up. :D
How about, "Through the Portal"?
Nicely done, my friend. :D Good job sticking to a main idea this time arounf. :D I did notice one small thing, though: when the second synth came in at about :48, it seemed like it was off key. Other than that, great job. Can;t wait to hear the whole thing. :D Oh, btw, "Through the Portal" is my suggestion to you as far as the name goes. :D
thanks for the reveiw and i will listen and fix it tell u when the real song goes live
I did like this one, but I have some critiques. :D To me, it seemed like the kick kinda took over the rest of the song and made it a little less relaxing. Loved the break at 1:36 - 2:10. Very nice piano work. :D I think the lead in to the synth at 2:39 was a bit fast, but that's just me being picky. XD Still, very nice song. 5/5 :D
ah but when criticism like this comes around its not bad,... not bad at all
(oh! and the kick.... i went over a friends house and his speakers have SUCH LOUD BASS the kick was the only thing heard. .... but on my speakers the kick is subtle and i hear this song without any distortion at all...
ooh i want to see it i can recognize the speed difference and maybe fix it. . otherwise just thanks man
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